2. Many Clemson students would like the study abroad program to be easily accessible and easy to understand. Students are busy, and do not have a large bracket of time to spend learning about the study abroad program. Currently, the study abroad program is not entirely successful at informing students of the many study abroad options. In order to make it more likely for students to take advantage of the program, I will better the situation by condensing all the information students need to consider in an easy to understand, to the point pamphlet discussing all aspects of the study abroad program.
3. Clemson students considering studying abroad are facing a somewhat overwhelming process. The current brochures and webpage do not answer all of their questions regarding the program. Students do not have enough free time to research all aspects of the program, leaving them wondering about such items such as financial aid and fulfilling their major's requirements. This situation results in many students who would love to study abroad not attempting and considering the option. I will make the decision to study abroad easier to understand by writing an easy to read pamphlet condensing vital information and necessary elements in a format that will help students choose how to take advantage of this option.
3 comments:
All three are really good options but we think that option 3 is the best one for your proposal. It highlights the problem's negative consequences in a way that will make people reading your proposal want to approve it.
Options one and two don't seem to explain why solving the problem is important as well.
I think the only real way your structures differ is in the amount of knowledge they assume your audience already has about our study abroad program, but I think number 3 is the most concise and addresses specific problems that people will come across so it is the best option.
I like 3 the best. It grabs the student whether they know about their study abroad options or not. They might find something to help enhance their study abroad.
I don't enjoy 1 very much out of the 3. (However all 3 are good)
2 is nice. For the student who doesn't have too much time to read up on study abroad. Even if they know everything it would be nice to have a summed up study abroad.
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